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heavy foot steps stubbled down the carpeted wood steps as the husky teen made his way down to the kitchen. The boy moaned, followed by him calling out for his mother."Maa! Whats for breakfast?!" When he made it to the bottom of the stairs he was not surprised to see his mother standing over the hot oven in the kitchen cooking. Liane took her eyes off the stove to look at her son. She smiled warmly at him, in response, Cartman grunted back at her and went to sit at the table to wait to be served. Obviously, Liane beyond spoiled her overweight son Eric. So much so he could easy gets whatever he wants by whining or simply asking her repeatedly. He would even verbally abuses her which she accepts without question. But even thought he was a spoiled brat and a bastard child, Liane is convinced of her son's goodness and accepts any excuses or stories he makes up, no matter how crazy it may seem.

"Breakfast will be ready in a minute, hon." She turned back to the stove to finish cooking. The brunette women placed the eggs and bacon infront of the chubby teen who started picking at the food the second she pulled her hand away. Humming, she walked away while the boy consumed his meal.

Latter that morning, Eric was sitting on the couch, watching the new Terrance and Phillip episode on the television. He was so into the television program he was completely oblivious to the world around him. Even when his mother called his name from the other room he just seemed as if he didn't hear her. Only when she called out for the third time did Eric give her any kind of response."What ma!? Im trying to watch Terrance and Phillip!" He whined/yelled loudly.

Smiling despite her sons rude behavior, Liane walked into the room."Sorry, hon." She apologized even though she did nothing wrong."I just wanted to tell you that we're having a guest over for dinner tonight." Her smile only brightened. Eric grunted and slumped deeper into the couch cushions. 'Probably just one of her boyfriends.'  He thought, eyes still glued to the TV.

"I want you to wash up and put on something nice for you brother, sweety." With that, she turned and walked up the stairs. The husky teen paused.'brother?' His thoughts where puzzled and confused.'She can't mean...'  He jumped to conclusions and started to panic. Abruptly, he scrambled to his feet and rushes or waddles to the bottom of the stairs."Maaa! Maa!" He cried.
"Yes, hon?" Liane poped her head out from behind her bedroom door."What what brother are you talking about!?" He demanded, afraid of the answer. Ms.Cartman opened the door all the way, revealing herself in a light purple bathrobe." Well, he's actually your half brother. " Eric froze. The brunette women continued."I think you met him when you were younger, you remember Scott don't you?" She asked, trying to recall the horrid chili con carnival her son held for the Tenorman boy all those years ago. He didn't answer. He just stood there, paralyzed from fear and shock. Liane just assumed he didn't remember and walked down the hall to the bathroom."I'll be in the shower sweety!" She called back down to Eric befor slaming the door behind her.
"I can't believe this!" The husky teen declared to himself as he held his head in his hands."I can't believe she invited HIM here!" He was in his room, only hours befor his half brother was due to arrive. Eric has been brainstorming on how to save himself from his enemy. He hasn't been this nervous since he thought Kyle was going to show their entire class the photo of him with Butters willy in his mouth.
The teen resembled the paranoid boy Tweek Tweak because of how nervous and jittery he was. "Hon?" His mother opened his bedroom door slightly and peeked her head threw the crack. Eric screamed at the suddeness of her presence, almost jumping out of his skin. He spun around in his revolving chair twards his mother."What?" He barked.
Startled by the boys barking tone, Liane steped back alittle."O-oh well, I wanted to see if you were getting ready, sweety." Her voice was timid and meek. Eric glared at his mother and spun back around in his chair."Yeah ma!" He barked back at her. She seemed a bit hurt but Liane kept her cheerful composure."Alrightly then." She was about to leave but then she added "And Scott called, he'll be here in alittle while." And she left the room.
Cartman's heart skiped a beat. 'He's going to kill me!'  Panic filled all of his senses. He glanced around the room for something that could help him. His room hasn't changed much since he was little. He refused to rid himself of his old stuffed play things like Clyde Frog, Polly Prissypants and Wellington bear. He was sitting at his desk with his old computer and lamp. The only thing that really changed was the size of his bed since he out grew his old one and he took down his poster of Mel Gibson after finding out he's loonier than a toon.
He heard the door bell ring from down stairs and he heard his mother's foot steps underneath him. Does she not know the evil she is letting into her home? "Hon! Come down here and meet your half brother!" She shouted. Cartman could feel that death was near.
Scott had grown since Eric had last saw him. His hair was still curly and red. His freckles had supsided slightly due to his ageing. His face and features had fined out a bit thought he still had dark bags under his chocolate brown eyes from eather a lack of sleep or because of the paleness of his skin. It seemed as he got older his ears and nose did't stand out as much as it did when he was fifteen. He was tall and thin, yet well built and healthy for his age and when he smiled you could see his perfect straight, white teeth from years of wearing braces. All in all, he was a pretty good looking young man.
'Still a stupid ginger...' Eric thought bitterly while his mother welcomed Scott in. Scott gave her a cheesy fake smile and thanked her. When he looked down to Eric who was still a few inces smaller then him, his fake, sweet smile changed to a sycotic Cheshire cat smile."Why hello Eric." His voice was laced with hatred when he said the younger boys name. Eric glared daggers back at his older half brother with such distaste and loathing that any one who didn't know would think that Scott was the one to kill Eric's parents instead of the other way around. "Hi Scott." He said reluctantly, folding his arms over his chest in a childish manner. Tension grew amongst the tree in the room.
"Well boys, why don't we sit down for Dinner?" Offered Ms.Cartman, shattering the awkward silence. "That would be lovely, Ms.Cartman." Scott cooed, looking back up to her and flashing her a sly grin. Liane let out a slight giggle, a light pink blush forming on her cheeks. "Please, call me Liane." She insisted.
"Liane..." He repeated smoothly making the brunette women giggle and blush more and making Eric sick to his stomach."I must say you look beautiful tonight, Liane." The young ginger gushed as they all made their way to the dinning room. Eric was glaring at Scott the whole time while Scott only glanced at him once or twice with that creepy Cheshire cat smile of his.
They sat down at the table where a large cooked chicken layed in the middle of the table. Surrounding the cooked bird were many side dishes like mashed potatoes, a dish of gravy and cream corn. For the adults, to drink was red wine since Scott was of legal age and for Eric, a two letter boddle of Coke-a-cola.
"Wow, chicken, wine, mashed potatoes and cream corn? A little much for just tree people, almost like it's thanksgiving! "Scott said, mouth watering from looking at the food. "Oh, well normaly it's just me and Eric, I always think I made too much but when we're done we never have left overs so I thought I'd make a lot just to be safe." She explaned, a little embarrassed."Well no wonder," Scott started, grining at Cartman who was sitting next to him at the table and pinched his chubby cheek painfully. "By the looks of it, chubby here can really put it away!" Liane couldn't help but laugh at this. Eric glared at Scott. "AY! Im not fat!" He argued."Tell him ma!"
She couldn't stop laughing, making Eric even more upset. Scott was just grining wildly and holding back afew laughs himself. Finally the laughter died down and the room was silent again but not as awkward as befor. Only after they all made their plates and started eating did conversion start up again.
"The food is delicious, Liane and the house looks so clean I wonder how a women can cook and clean and still manage to look so good." Eric had to stop himself from gagging in disgust even after his mother giggled like a little school girl and shyly thanked Scott for the complements. For the fist time Eric didn't want to eat. He was literally sick to his stomach so he just picked at his food with his fork.
After dinner the tree were sitting in the living room talking. Well Liane and Scott were. Cartman was just sitting there on the couch not bothering to jump into their conversion. Not as if his voice could be heard over the others loud voices and laughter. So far, this wasn't as bad as Eric had expected. He was almost sure Scott would have tryed to kill him by now. Just then the phone rang.
'Oh thank you jesus!' Cartman jump off the couch and dashed over to the phone."Hello?" Eric asked when he answers the phone."Hey Cartman..." Said the reluctant voice of Kyle Broflovski. "Kyle? what do you want jew?!" Eric yelled into the phone sounding just as irritated and reluctant to talk to Kyle as he was. Kyle sighed."I was wondering if...if you were doing anything tonight?"
The chubby teen was silent and was scowling at the phone. Normally he would laugh and make some sort of rude remark but then he remembered the situation he was in with his half brother."Kyle! Right now my half brother Scott Tenorman is here, my mom invited him over for dinner!"
He heard Kyle huff in frustrated anger and he hung up the phone.(Read chaper 1)"...Kyle?" Eric called.
"Kyle!?!" He looked at the phone in disbelief and anger."Kyle! The fuck? That drity jew hung up on me!" He shouted to no one in particular. Cartman nearly jumped out of his skin when a dark sinister voice came from behind him."Whats the matter Eric?" The teen turned to see his half brother glaring at him with that wicked creepy smile of his. Eric glared back at the adult ginger."What are you doing here? What are you planing?" He hissed out each word slowly and hatfully.
"Im going to do to your mother what you did to mine! Maybe then you'll understand the pain you caused me." Scott stated, the smile never once leaving his freckled face. Cartman's expression changed from an angry glare into a horrified and upset one."I-I wont let you do that!"
Scotts smile disappeared and what replaced with a long frown as he grabed a large knife off the kitchen counter."Just try and stop me!" And then he dashed for the living room. Eric followed soon after to find that. He say that Scott was slowly tip-toeing twards his mother with the knife held over his head, ready to stab. That horrible, sycotic smile was back on his face but this time he had a very determined look in his eyes.
Eric was about to lunge at him but then his mother unexpectedly turned her head twards Scott. But unfortunately, and almost impossibly he hide the knife behind his back in record time befor Liane had a chance to see it. A nervous and slightly irritated big grin took up most of his face. Liane smiled sweetly at him befor standing up and saying "Excuse me, I need to use the restroom." and without a word from anyone she walked away and up the stairs to the restroom.
Eric let out a long sigh in relief. But his inlightenment was short lived when he saw Scott make his way twords the stairs."Wait!" He grabed the older man by the arm, successfully stoping him."She didn't do anything, she doesn't deserve this! It's me your pissed at." This was surprisingly nobel for the normaly selfish and cruel Eric Cartman. Scott snarled at his younger half brother and riped his arm out of his grip."Neather did my parents but that didn't stop you, did it?" He mumbled hatefully.
Maybe for the first time ever, Eric felt guilt for something that he did. Maybe cause this is the first time he ever had to pay so greatfully for his actions. "And your mother HAS done something wrong to me and the whole world,"Cartman looked up to him in confusion. Scott grined and continued, in a low harsh voice."She brough you into this world..." Eric's mind was sent somewhere else. He wasn't in his home anymore. He was in his own little world. It was pitch black for miles. He was floating in mid air in this never ending sea of black. Images flashed befor his eyes of all the times people told him he was just a worthless bastard child. Images of him crying himself to sleep because he didn't have a dad when he was young.
He snaped back to reality, he was back in his house with his mother and this psycho bastard infront of him. He was engulfed in rage and hate from years of abuse and hatred. Scott was still staring at him with a horrible and amused smirk making Eric even more furious. He wanted to prove everyone wrong. He wanted to prove he was more then just a bastard child.
"Stay. The. Fuck. Away. From. My. Mom!" With all his might, he pushed the older male making him stumble backwards. He was able to catch himself but he steped on something hard and made of metle, breaking it. Eric let out a loud gasp and covered his mouth with his hands. All anger and rage he felt was extinguished and was replaced with shock and dismay.
Scott looked at Eric in confusion. He looked down and lifted his foot to see what he broke. It was a nintendo wii. Or it was. Now it's nothing but scrap metal and broken parts. Eric fell to his knees, staring at the now ruined game station."NO! No, why god?! Why!?" He screamed. He was hunched over and sobbing into his hands now pounding his fist on the ground as he damned his brother. He looked like Scott did when he found out he had eaten his parents and his favorite band saw him cry about it.
The ginger blinked in confusion. "Are you serious?You gotta be kidding me!" He yelled over Erics sobes. The older of the two sneered at him with a frown feeling as if he had done what he felt he needed to but still not completely satisfied. Then an Idea struck him on how to scar Eric in another way. The grin reappeared on his face when he heard Ms.Cartman coming back.
That night Eric didn't sleep a wink as he was forced to listen to the loud moans and cries of his mother and Scott from down the hall. He also faintly heard the creaking of his mothers bed. This was something he heard offen and he could usually sleep it off but thinking of just who his mother was pleasuring drove him crazy. They seemed to go at it for hours without stop and the poor boy was horribly aware of it all.
The worse part of this was that he could tell what was going on by the moans and other sounds and it sounded like Ms. Cartman was giving Scott a fall on fellatio.
The next morning Eric and his mother waved goodbye to Scott as he walked out of the house. He kissed Liane on the cheek and knowingly grined at his tired looking half brother, then he walked out the front door thanking them for the night.
"We should invite him over again sometime." Liane said closing the door.
"Never again..." Eric mumbled and walked up stairs to finally go to sleep leaving his mother in confusion.
part one- [link]

I was going to do stan and kenny out to dinner with both their familys but I liked the way this came out and I didn't know what to write for them

south park-matt and trey
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